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Lovely. The poem all encompassing for me this week, “grief, regret, joy”. Te lo agradezco

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"slightly winded older now" am I

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Bless your imagination!

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So lovely to read your words each week. Thank you.

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Another shared experience and I’m grateful. Thanks, Richard.

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Really like the picture. Did you take it?

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Yes, and I threw the pebble too!

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Great. I really like the composition.

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Thanks Robert. Much appreciated.

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We hold so much in and could all take the time to really breath. I know I could really use some lessons in meaningful breathing.

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Beautiful. A new favorite of mine among your poems.

The photo, as always, is a perfect match for the post and the poem.

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What a great mind you have sir, not only an amazing lyricist

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Wow! Thanks for this - it captures exactly and beautifully the heightened senses and inner exploration of your thoughts that happens in a meditation class - 'wanting nothing so much as not wanting'.

Apparently, there's a saying in Zen Buddhism that the only way to understand it is to 'enter the cave yourself and face the dragon'. I tried to, several years back and going through a rough patch of life. It was one of the few things that helped but, try as I might, I could never entirely let go of wanting to know where my thoughts were leading. In the end I guess it was enough to be given time and space and someone saying it's okay to just be. The thought of the experience still makes a connection and helps when things get too frantic.

Your shop window experience (if this was you) resonated too - I'm a teacher and the other day had to order a singing bowl for a lesson on Buddhism. I was ridiculously happy when it arrived, nestled on its cushion, to find out it had travelled all the way from Nepal (with many exotic stamps to prove it). I spent the rest of the day ringing it at various intervals just to enjoy the sound and the memories of peacefulness. Did you buy anything I wonder?

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Thanks for the wonderful comment Sue. Yes, this poem is autobiographical. The setting for the first part is the Zen Mountain Monastery (Mt. Tremper NY), where I lived for 9 months after college. A previous version ended with me buying the singing bowl (which I did, and still have). I understand your ridiculous happiness. They're magical things.

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9 months in a Zen monastery sounds like an amazing experience.

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It was. And I should do it again.

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Beautiful.

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Thanks Rose.

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Beautiful poem, beautifully read.

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Loved hearing this tonight.... Think it’s what I was looking for when I came over here and started reading, when i really need to go to sleep. Glad you’re doing this, and was very glad to hear you at the Towne Crier tonight. Enjoy the rest of the tour.

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Whoops. Was accidentally signed in on my spouse’s account. That was actually my comment--I was the one at the Towne Crier tonight with our neighbors--he’s off at his 50th HS reunion.

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